My name is Wang Jie.I come from China,I am a senior high school student,Because
of The college test is coming,I am very nervous and want to know how to learn my
english.In my spare time,I often play guitar and listen to music.Actually,Music
can relax the mood.My favorite songer is Jay of chinese music which He was
famous of the Blue And White China.In fact,China have a number of delicious
foods.For example,The barbecue of Zi Bo.As we know ,ShanDong province is
enthusiastic and welcome all over the world people,To feeling traditional
chinese culture. OK, that is a simple artic of mine
Hi Wang Jie!
Good job on your writing!
Here are some corrections and explanations
, Because - we can't begin a sentence in English with because. So.. you can say instead "I am very nervous because my college test is coming".
Actually, - it's not natural to put actually at the beginning of a sentence. A better synonym would be in fact music relaxed me/improves my mood.
China have - 3rd person singular so China has ( you probably know, it's a very common mistake!)
The shandong province - you need to say clearly that it's the people who are enthusiastic and they welcome people all over the world. As you've written it sounds like the land is enthusiastic and welcomes people so it sounds a little strange:)
To feeling Chinese culture - the meaning isn't very clear here ..but I think you mean that in the shandong province you can feel/get a sense of traditional Chinese culture.
Simple artic - artic is a very cold place in the world. So I think you mean article. E.g. this is my simply written article.
You may think it's simple but it's also interesting writing about your culture, food, people and traditions.
Keep up the good work!