Hello, my name is Ivy. I’m Taiwanese. Taiwan is a beautiful island, especially the east coast. If you have chance to travel to Taiwan you must grab it with both hands! 逗號和句號前面不用加空格，在這種標點符號後面才要加 包括bore的那一句我不清楚妳想表達的是甚麼 Grab it with both hands相當於好好保握（機會） 繼續加油囉！

Hello , my name is Ivy. I’m a Taiwanese. Taiwan is a beautiful island especially the east coastal , there is a good bore , if you have chance to be here must travel there. You are right have heard about that place before is a nice place to be