Marat Temirgaliyev
My average working day starts at 8:30. I go to work by my own car. On arriving to office, I deink coffee and eat some snack. Then I work until lunch. After lunch I walk outside with my colleagues. By the end of the lunch time, we back to the office and continue our work. During the day, we also, have some snacks and coffee. At 17:30 I left job and go home or to my wife's office to pick her up and go home together. Someday, I go to gym. At home, I have dinner with my family and talk to them about their day.
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31 aug. 2021 15:27
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My average work day starts at 8:30. I drive to work and upon arriving to the office, I snack and drink some coffee. I work until lunch time and then after lunch, me and my colleagues take a walk. By the end of lunch, we're back in the office finishing up our work. During this time we also snack and drink coffee too. At 17:30 I leave work to either go straight home, pick up my wife from her job and then we'll go home together, or I'll sometimes just go to the gym. At home, I have dinner with the family and talk about our day.
Hello Marat. This conversation sounds more natural. I hope this helps. If you have anymore questions or need any help don't be afraid to ask.
1 september 2021
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My average work day starts at 8:30. I go to work in my own car. Upon arriving at the office, I drink coffee and eat some snacks. Then I work until lunch. After lunch I walk outside with my colleagues. By the end of lunch, we return to the office and continue working. During the day, we also, have more snacks and coffee. At 17:30, I leave my job and go home or to my wife's office to pick her up and we go home together. Somedays, I go to gym. At home, I have dinner with my family and talk to them about their days.
In the last part of the section, use the present tense because you are talking about habitual actions. And watch out for some of the plural agreement for example "talk to THEM about THEIR dayS". Well done!
31 augustus 2021
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My average working day starts at 8:30. I go to work in my own car. After arriving (or upon arrival) to the office, I drink coffee and eat some snacks. Then I work until lunch. After lunch I walk outside with my colleagues. By the end of lunch time, we go back to the office and continue our work. During the day, we also have some snacks and coffee. At 17:30 I leave my job and either go home or to my wife's office to pick her up to go home together. Some days, I go to the gym. At home, I have dinner with my family and talk to them about their day.
Very good! Only a few slight inaccuracies.
31 augustus 2021
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