Is this sentence correct? I use "that" twice which sounds a bit awkward. How can I make it better and sound more natural?
"There is one interesting thing that happened this weekend that I would like to share with you."
You can remove the second “that”. The sentence still works grammatically and logically without it, and omitting it would prevent that repetition.
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"One interesting thing happened this weekend that ..."
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This looks great! You could rephrase it to say something like “I want to share something interesting that happened this weekend”. Your sentence looks great! This is just a way to make it a little less formal.
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There was one interesting thing that happened this weekend and I would like to share it with you (or tell you about it)
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It is correct, but you are right, somewhat awkward. You can simply remove unnecessary words and the sentence will read better: "An interesting thing happened this weekend that I would like to share with you."
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