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Recently, I have been feeling tired because I have many tests and reports in various classes. The end of the semester is always a busy and stressful time for university students. However, I know that once I get through this difficult period, spring break will be waiting for me, so I try to stay motivated. Thinking about having time to relax and enjoy myself after finishing my assignments makes me feel excited.In Japan, the academic year changes in April, and I will soon move up to the next grade. Looking back, this year was extremely enjoyable and rewarding for me. I was able to learn many new things through my classes and experiences, and I also grew both academically and personally. Most importantly, this year was special because I was able to decide on my future dream. It was not an easy decision, but after thinking carefully about what I truly want to do, I finally found a clear goal for myself. From April, I plan to study hard for entrance examinations in order to achieve my dream. I know that it will require a lot of effort and patience, but I am determined to do my best and not give up.In addition, I am really looking forward to this weekend because I will attend my Coming-of-Age Ceremony. I will wear a traditional kimono called furisode and reunite with my friends from junior high school and high school. I am very excited to see them again and share our memories. This event will be a meaningful milestone in my life!
8 jan. 2026 14:58
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Recently, I have been feeling tired because I have many tests and reports in my different subjects. The end of the semester is always a busy and stressful time for university students. However, I know that once I get through this difficult period, spring break will be waiting for me, so I am trying to stay motivated. Thinking about having time to relax and enjoy myself after finishing my assignments is keeping me going. In Japan, the academic year starts in April, and I will be starting my next year. Looking back, this year has been extremely enjoyable and rewarding for me. I was able to learn many new things through my classes and experiences, and I also grew both academically and personally. Most importantly, this year was special because I was able to figure out my dream for the future. It was not an easy decision, but after thinking carefully about what I truly want to do, I finally found a clear goal. From April, I plan to study hard for my entrance examinations in order to achieve my dream. I know that it will require a lot of effort and patience, but I am determined to do my best and persevere. In addition, I am really looking forward to this weekend because I will be attending my Coming-of-Age Ceremony. I will wear a traditional kimono called a furisode and reunite with my friends from junior high school and high school. I am very excited to see them again and share our memories. This event will be a meaningful milestone in my life!
What a wonderful and inspiring post! Your English is excellent, and I could have honestly left it as it was and you would have been perfectly understood. Your positive attitude toward your future goals is great to see. One thing I noticed is that you use 'decide on' and 'makes me feel excited.' These are perfectly correct, but in the UK, we often use phrases like 'figure out' or 'keeping me going' to sound a bit more natural and conversational. I also changed 'move up to the next grade' to 'be starting my next year' as this would be the more British way to say it, however what you said was perfectly acceptable in both US and UK English. Also, congratulations on your Coming-of-Age Ceremony! A 'furisode' sounds beautiful—I hope you have a fantastic time reuniting with your old friends. Keep up the great work! — Matt
9 jan. 2026 18:51
Recently, I have been feeling tired because I have many tests and reports in various classes. The end of the semester is always a busy and stressful time for university students. However, I know that once I get through this difficult period, spring break will be waiting for me, so I try to stay motivated. Thinking about having time to relax and enjoy myself after finishing my assignments makes me feel excited.In Japan, the academic year changes in April, and I will soon move up to the next grade. Looking back, this year was extremely enjoyable and rewarding for me. I was able to learn many new things through my classes and experiences, and I also grew both academically and personally. Most importantly, this year was special because I was able to decide on my future dream. It was not an easy decision, but after thinking carefully about what I truly want to do, I finally found a clear goal for myself. From April, I plan to study hard for entrance examinations in order to achieve my dream. I know that it will require a lot of effort and patience, but I am determined to do my best and not give up.In addition, I am really looking forward to this weekend because I will attend my Coming-of-Age Ceremony. I will wear a traditional kimono called furisode and reunite with my friends from junior high school and high school. I am very excited to see them again and share our memories. This event will be a meaningful milestone in my life!
8 jan. 2026 18:06
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