Kanae
Could someone please correct my English?
I just started watching Stranger Things. It's kind of scary, so my heart is pounding so fast while watching it. It is awesome and drew me in! Once I started watching it, I can't stop it.π
(Japanese)
Stranger Thingsγθ¦ε§γγΎγγγε°γζγζγγγγ¦γγγγγγγͺγγ観γ¦γΎγγγγγι’η½γγ¦γγγγΎγγοΌδΈεΊ¦θ¦εΊγγγγγγγγͺγγ
10 okt. 2020 11:51
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Could someone please correct my English? I have just started watching Stranger
Things. It's kind of scary and my heart pounds so fast while/ when I watch it.
It is awesome and has drawn me in ! Once I start watching it, I can't stop.π
(Japanese) Stranger
Thingsγθ¦ε§γγΎγγγε°γζγζγγγγ¦γγγγγγγͺγγ観γ¦γΎγγγγγι’η½γγ¦γγγγΎγγοΌδΈεΊ¦θ¦εΊγγγγγγγγͺγγ
10 oktober 2020
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Could someone please correct my English? I just started watching Stranger Things. It's kind of scary, and my heart is pounding so fast when I watch it.
It is awesome and drew me in! Once I start watching it, I can't stop.π
(Japanese) Stranger
Thingsγθ¦ε§γγΎγγγε°γζγζγγγγ¦γγγγγγγͺγγ観γ¦γΎγγγγγι’η½γγ¦γγγγΎγγοΌδΈεΊ¦θ¦εΊγγγγγγγγͺγγ
Funny, my daughter is also hooked up on Stranger Things :).
Your version is actually quite good, so consider my suggestions mostly stylistic.
Last sentence is changed with an assumption that you're saying that once you turn it on, you can't stop watching. If the idea was just to re-iterate that you started watching it and now you're hooked up, I'd just say " I can't stop watching it now".
10 oktober 2020
Hello! If you want , could we help each other to improve english language ??
11 oktober 2020
Could someone please correct my English? I just started watching Stranger
Things. It's kind of scary, so my heart is pounding so fast while watching it.
It is awesome and drew me in! Once I started watching it, I can't stop it.π
(Japanese) Stranger
Thingsγθ¦ε§γγΎγγγε°γζγζγγγγ¦γγγγγγγͺγγ観γ¦γΎγγγγγι’η½γγ¦γγγγΎγγοΌδΈεΊ¦θ¦εΊγγγγγγγγͺγγ
I can teach you English but can you please teach me Japanese in return.
10 oktober 2020
Could someone please correct my English? I just started watching Stranger
Things. It's kind of scary, so my heart is pounding so fast while watching it.
It is awesome and drew me in! Once I started watching it, I can't stop it.π
(Japanese) Stranger
Thingsγθ¦ε§γγΎγγγε°γζγζγγγγ¦γγγγγγγͺγγ観γ¦γΎγγγγγι’η½γγ¦γγγγΎγγοΌδΈεΊ¦θ¦εΊγγγγγγγγͺγγ
No plm i m here , i m english teacher ,, will u learn english from me
10 oktober 2020
Wil je sneller vooruitgang boeken?
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