To whom it may concern,
I have some great ideas capable of attracting lots of tourists to our town.
First of all, I think that creating some good events could be a magnet for the people. For example, we could organise an event where streets artists could sell their work. People love the street art and this could be a great chance also for young artists in order to increase their popularity. Obviously, in order to have a lot of people involved in our event we have to increase our public transport system. Currently the last train is at 8 pm: this is not acceptable. I think that when there will be these events, we will have to organise an all nightly ran transport”. Furthermore, if we resolve the problem about public transport, we will not have any problem with parking.
Secondly, another interesting idea could be building new walking tours. In this way we could attract a lot of families. In addition, we could postpone the closing of shops and encourage night shopping.
In conclusion, I think that there could be lots of great ideas to attract tourists and if we work hard we will have fantastic results.
I look forward to working together,
Yours faithfully,
Matteo Zoccolan
Nice English Matteo. If you want some feedback, there are words I would change and sentences I'd rephrase (I didn't want to completely rewrite your letter as I thought that would be rude.) One tip I can give you is sometimes less is better, a couple of times i deleted a few words just to replace it with one, you're making it harder for yourself and more convoluted. Great job either way and I hope your letter makes a difference :)