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Yesterday, I had a part-time job. Recently, it has been very busy, but yesterday there were not many customers, so it was very quiet. It was so quiet that I actually wanted it to be a little busier. This Sunday, I have a relative’s wedding, so I will go back to my hometown after school today. I won’t be able to work for a while, but I’m looking forward to going home because I haven’t been back in a long time. After school today, I’m going to buy clothes to wear to the wedding. I need to decide quickly, so I will try not to take too long to choose. For lunch today, my friend is going to buy Subway for me, so I’m really excited. Next time, I want to eat McDonald’s or pizza together too.

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Yesterday, I had a part-time job. Recently, it has been very busy, but yesterday there were not many customers, so it was very quiet. It was so quiet that I actually wanted it to be a little busier. This Sunday, I have a relative’s wedding, so I will go back to my hometown after school today. I will not be able to work for a while, but I am looking forward to going home because I have not been back in a long time. After school today, I am going to buy clothes to wear to the wedding. I need to decide quickly, so I will try not to take too long to choose. For lunch today, my friend is going to buy Subway for me, so I am really excited. Next time, I want to eat McDonald’s or pizza together too.
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Yesterday, I went to work at my part-time job. Recently, it has been very busy, but yesterday there were not many customers, so it was very quiet. It was so quiet that I actually wanted it to be a little busier. This Sunday, I have a relative’s wedding, so I will go back to my hometown after school today. I won’t be able to work for a while, but I’m looking forward to going home because I haven’t been back in a long time. After school today, I’m going to buy clothes to wear to the wedding. I need to decide quickly, so I will try not to take too long to choose. For lunch today, my friend is going to buy a Subway for me, so I’m really excited. Next time, I want to eat a McDonald’s or pizza together too.
Great writing. A part-time job is something that we have generally, as a state; it's not something that we can have on one particular day. Also, we often refer to 'having a McDonald's', 'having a Subway' (the word 'meal' is implied). Have a nice time at the wedding!

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