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Awhile ago , a girl I work with left her own lunch for me as she wasnt hungry.First I felt shy and said no. But afterwards My hunger prevailed . She was on her way out of the room when I was walking by , she saw me and asked if I wanted her lunch and I said yes. When I saw her walking out of the room, I figured she was getting out to drink water or smth but it turned out she was going home. She was carrying lots of things and automatically , this sentence popped out of my mouth : you need help take them out Then I felt stupid . I said that sentence leaving out the ,,to" . Have a look at this writing and please tell me if this would sound natural and correct in spoken english .
1 okt. 2021 14:20
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A while ago, a girl I work with offered her lunch to me, as she wasn't hungry. A first, I felt shy and said, 'No'. But after some time, my hunger got the better of me. She was on her way out of the room when I happened to be walking by. She saw me and repeated the question from earlier. This time, with a smile, I accepted. When I'd seen her walking out of the room, I had figured she was just nipping out to grab a drink of water or something, but it turned out that she was actually going home. She was carrying lots of things - and automatically, this sentence slipped out of my mouth, "You need help take them out?" Then I felt stupid. I had said that sentence leaving out the 'to'. I know it's an easy mistake to forget the little things. Have a look at this writing and please tell me if this would sound natural and correct in spoken english .
I like your paragraphs. Note these phrases.: 'Got the better of me.' is something for you to look up. And find some similar fun expressions... '...popped into my mind...' versus '...slipped out of my mouth...' On another note; I'd actually say, "Would you like help taking those out...?"
1 oktober 2021
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