I live in Tokyo Japan (capital T). The fall/autumn season has started here. (Make fall the subject of the sentence) I feel crisp air in the mornings. (More than one morning) It's below 15 degrees. We need a jacket and scarf. I love this weather because we can enjoy winter clothes!!! Well done Yumi. A few typos I’ve corrected. And a few other suggestions too. Hope they help. Simon

I live in Tokyo, Japan. Fall has just started here and I can feel the crisp/fresh/invigorating air in the morning. It's below 15 degrees. We need to wear jackets and scarfs and I love this weather because we can enjoy winter clothes!!!

I live in Tokyo, Japan. The fall season has started here, and I can feel the crisp air in the morning. It’s below 15 degrees, so we need jackets and scarves. I love this weather because we can enjoy wearing winter clothes!

I live in Tokyo, Japan. Fall has arrived here. The air is crisp in the mornings. It's 15 degrees below zero (-15). We need a jacket and scarf. I love this weather because we can enjoy wearing winter clothes!!!

I live in tokyo Japan. It started fall season here. I feel crisp air in the morning. It's below 15 degrees. We need jaket and skarf. I love this weater because we can enjoy weinter clothes!!!