Hello~ Is my pronunciation good? What should I pay attention to?

The text I read is in the photo, hope my handwriting is understandable😆

Thanks in advance![Audio][Image]

Question

Hello~ Is my pronunciation good? What should I pay attention to?

The text I read is in the photo, hope my handwriting is understandable😆

Thanks in advance![Audio][Image]

Answer

Overall, your pronunciation, stress, rhythm and intonation are excellent. The only weaknesses in your pronunciation that i noticed are /w/ vs. /v/ and /I/ vs. /i/.