Search from various Engels teachers...
Follow your HEART
Sarah, an actress retired last year.
She was popular as an actress.
Now she works as a writer.
She wrote some books after her retirement.
She is getting more popular as a writer after retirement.
13 jun. 2024 10:40
Correcties · 1
Sarah, an actress retired last year. She was popular as an actress, and now
works as a writer. She wrote some books after her retirement, and is becoming popular in that sphere.
You were correct to keep your sentences short. However, your writing was very stilted and unnatural. I changed it to make it flow a bit better
13 juni 2024
Wil je sneller vooruitgang boeken?
Word nu lid van deze leer-community en probeer de gratis oefeningen uit!
Follow your HEART
Taalvaardigheden
Arabisch, Chinees (Mandarijn), Engels, Duits, Koreaans, Spaans
Taal die wordt geleerd
Engels
Artikelen die je misschien ook leuk vindt
Why "General English" is Failing Your Career (An Engineer’s Perspective)
20 likes · 8 Opmerkingen
Why Many Kids Struggle With English - and How the Right Tutor Makes a Difference
3 likes · 3 Opmerkingen
Why “Just Around the Corner” Is (Usually) a Lie
14 likes · 10 Opmerkingen
Meer artikelen
