capAhmed Nabil
Going to work abroad: an exciting opportunity or a scary one? Some people love to work abroad but is it an exciting opportunity or a scary one? The main advantage is that working abroad make you meet new people and make new friends for example if you work abroad in city has different language that you speak, it makes you learn language very fast because you have no choice but speaking that language. And it makes you ambitious person because you have to prove yourself and you have to success. On other hand it’s a scary because you have no one trust or reliable to help you for example, if you had an accident no one will help you. And you’ll be alone and you have to cook for yourself and you have to wash your clothes and you have to do all the homework by yourself so it’s a really an exciting and scary adventure. To sum up the working abroad has advantage or exciting advantage like meeting new friend and learn different language and it’s a scary advantage because you’ve no one reliable and you have to do all your homework by yourself so what do you think it is an exciting opportunity or a scary one??!.
28 feb. 2022 17:55
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I would recommend the following adjustments for the first paragraph. It's very likely that, at this level, you would get the most benefit from reviewing this much text with a teacher. This way, you can discuss the edits and understand the principles behind them enough to make significant progress. The main advantage is that working abroad makes you meet new people and make new friends. For example, if you work abroad in city that has a different language than you speak, it helps you learn the language very quickly because you have no choice but to speak it. It also makes you an ambitious person because you have to prove yourself and you have to be successful.
28 februari 2022
Genodigde
What J Paloma said is all true. That’s what I would correct and recommend myself. By the way, this text is really good.
1 maart 2022
Your English is very good and just requires some small sdjustments to make it more natural but its almost impossible to correct this text in the questions section here
1 maart 2022
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