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Text writing practice 9
Subject: Wealth of the mind is the only true wealth.
As is know to all, money is not everything, but everything can not leave without money. Therefore, people consider mostly that numerous money represents sufficient wealth. I don't mean to judge it, however, I prefer wealth of the mind is the only true wealth.
I would like to hold serveral reasons to explain why I think my value of wealth is more rational. Firstly, never can people ignore this significance of the positive cognition to wealth. Wealth seems a evil controled our behavior like a sword, not only can it be attacked enermies, but also it can be hurted even ourselves. Secondly, the sophisticated mind is the key to obtain wealth. Money, power and glory are like the water in the stream, they are always flowing, but wealth of the mind is like the classical architacture never outdate.
To conclude, we live in the society that people more and more focus wealth. Undoutedly, the essence of wealth never changed is the wealth of the mind.
8 dec. 2021 08:31
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Text writing practice 9
Subject: Wealth of the mind is the only true wealth.
As is known to all, money is not everything, but everything can not leave money. Therefore, people consider lots of money to represent sufficient wealth. I don't mean to judge it, however, I prefer wealth of the mind and think that it is the only true wealth.
I would like to give several reasons to explain why I think my value of wealth is more rational. Firstly, people cannot ignore the significance of the positive cognition. Wealth can seem like an evil, controlling our behavior like a sword, not only can it attack enemies, but it can also hurt ourselves. Secondly, the sophisticated mind is the key to obtain wealth. Money, power and glory are like the water in the stream, they are always flowing, but wealth of the mind is like the classical architecture that never fades.
To conclude, we live in the society in which people focus more and more on wealth. Undoubtedly, the essence of wealth has never changed and it is the wealth of the mind.
Hi Kratosfan, good ideas but it can do with more exposition :)
8 december 2021
Text writing practice 9
Subject: Wealth of the mind is the only true wealth.
As is known to all, money is not everything, but everything can not leave without money. Therefore, people consider mostly that numerous money represents sufficient wealth. I don't mean to judge it, however, I prefer wealth of the mind is the only true wealth.
I would like to hold several reasons to explain why I think my value of wealth is more rational. Firstly, never can people ignore this significance of positive cognition to wealth. Wealth seems a devil controlling our behavior, like a sword, not only can it be attacked enemies, but also it can be hurt even ourselves. Secondly, the sophisticated mind is the key to obtaining wealth. Money, power, and glory are like water in the stream, they are always flowing but the wealth of the mind is like the classical architecture that is never outdated.
To conclude, we live in a society that people more and more focus wealth. Undoubtedly, the essence of unchanged wealth is the wealth of the mind.
8 december 2021
Text writing practice 9 Subject: Wealth of the mind is the only true wealth. As
it's know to all, money is not everything, but one can not live without
money. Therefore, people consider mostly that enormous money represents
sufficient wealth. I don't mean to judge it, however, I prefer wealth of the
mind as the only true wealth. I would like to hold several reasons to explain
why I think my value of wealth is more rational. Firstly, none can
ignore this significance of the positive cognition to wealth. Wealth seems like a
evil controlling our behavior like a sword, not only can it attack enemies,
but also it can hurt even ourselves. Secondly, the sophisticated mind is
the key to obtain wealth. Money, power and glory are like the water in the
stream, they are always flowing, but wealth of the mind is like the classical
architecture that never outdate. To conclude, we live in the society where people focus more
and more on wealth. Undoutedly, the essence of wealth is
wealth of the mind.
8 december 2021
Text writing practice 9 Subject: Wealth of the mind is the only true wealth. As
is know to all, money is not everything, but everything can not leave without
money. Therefore, people consider mostly that numerous money represents
sufficient wealth. I don't mean to judge it, however, I prefer wealth of the
mind is the only true wealth. I would like to hold serveral reasons to explain
why I think my value of wealth is more rational. Firstly, never can people
ignore this significance of the positive cognition to wealth. Wealth seems a
evil controled our behavior like a sword, not only can it be attacked enermies,
but also it can be hurted even ourselves. Secondly, the sophisticated mind is
the key to obtain wealth. Money, power and glory are like the water in the
stream, they are always flowing, but wealth of the mind is like the classical
architacture never outdate. To conclude, we live in the society that people more
and more focus wealth. *Undoubtedly*, the essence of wealth never changed is the
wealth of the mind.
8 december 2021
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