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Yesterday, I came home after work and went to bed right away. I was planning to wake up at around 8 a.m. today, but I kept sleeping and woke up at around 6 p.m. After that, I ordered Sukiya on Uber Eats. I ordered a cheese beef bowl and a cheesecake-flavored drink. The drink was supposed to have a cookie-like topping, but it was missing. So, I could not drink the drink I really wanted. I wanted to go shopping, but I did not have enough energy. So, I stayed home and watched YouTube. My room was also messy, and I wanted to clean it, but I did not have the energy to do that either. I ate snacks while watching YouTube and played eFootball. I won many games, so it was fun. Tomorrow, I have work from 2 p.m. to 11:30 p.m. I want to wake up earlier and do my homework and clean my room before work. One of my senior coworkers could not take a test. If he cannot take a make-up test, he may have to repeat the school year. So, I tried to help him take the test. I also started coughing because I slept with the air conditioner on. I often got colds for the same reason last year, so I think I should buy a humidifier to avoid getting sick. I will go back to my parents’ house on August 7th. Until then, I decided to work every day, so I submitted my work schedule. Honestly, working six days in a row will be very hard, but I want to do my best because I can eat delicious food and relax when I go home. Recently, I have been using Uber Eats too much, and my money is disappearing quickly. So, I want to try to cook for myself more often. It has also become very hot since about a week ago, and I get very tired because of the heat. I want to drink water often and be careful not to get heatstroke. I really want the weather to become cooler soon!
23 jul. 2026 13:39
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Yesterday, I came home after work and went straight to bed. I was planning to wake up at around 8 a.m. today, but I kept sleeping and didn’t wake up until around 6 p.m. After that, I ordered Sukiya on Uber Eats. I ordered a cheese beef bowl and a cheesecake-flavoured drink. The drink was supposed to have a cookie-like topping, but it was missing, so I couldn’t enjoy the drink I had really wanted. I wanted to go shopping, but I didn’t have enough energy, so I stayed at home, watched YouTube, and played eFootball. My room was also messy, and I wanted to clean it, but I didn’t have the energy for that either. I ate snacks while watching YouTube and won many games in eFootball, so I had a lot of fun. Tomorrow, I have work from 2 p.m. to 11:30 p.m. I want to wake up earlier so that I can do my homework and clean my room before work. One of my senior coworkers couldn’t take a test. If he cannot take a make-up test, he may have to repeat the school year. So, I tried to help him prepare for the test. I also started coughing because I slept with the air conditioner on. I often caught colds for the same reason last year, so I think I should buy a humidifier to avoid getting sick. I will go back to my parents’ house on 7 August. Until then, I’ve decided to work every day, so I submitted my work schedule. Honestly, working six days in a row will be very hard, but I want to do my best because I’ll be able to eat delicious food and relax when I go home. Recently, I’ve been using Uber Eats too much, and my money is disappearing quickly. So, I want to try cooking for myself more often. It has also become very hot over the past week, and I get very tired because of the heat. I want to drink water regularly and be careful not to get heatstroke. I really want the weather to become cooler soon!
Level: C1+. This is an excellent diary entry. It is detailed, coherent, and very easy to read despite its length. You describe events, emotions, and future plans naturally while using a wide range of vocabulary and sentence structures. Most of the corrections were stylistic and idiomatic rather than grammatical, which is a sign of advanced writing. Excellent work! 😊
23 jul. 2026 17:23
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