B2 Writing Cambridge exam preparation . Please correct my writing like in the B2
first exam for schools. I'd love to get feedback. I know I have already chosen a
topic but I would like to talk about "Teenagers are too young to teach other
people anything" Do you agree? In my opinion teenagers are not too young to
teach other people anything, and here is the reason why i think that. I think we
all can learn from anyone; it doesnt have to be an older person or your teacher.
We can even learn from a baby! Everyone in the world is different and we
don't all have the same way of thinking. I know some people might think that
everything they do is the best way to do things or that they are always right. But
thats not true, I have never met anyone that has never made any mistakes. We are
humans and we all make mistakes, some of them are more serious than other ones.
Maybe for me to drop a cup it’s nothing and for you it means the world. Thats
why I think we all can learn from everyone because we all are different and
maybe we can adopt better habits from other people. So try to be open to others and
admit your errors because that is the best way to learn.