Farewell my English class Today is a sad day, because my English course will end. I am grateful to my English teacher -- Natalie. So far as I think her class is the best English class. She boosts

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Farewell my English class Today is a sad day, because my English course will end. I am grateful to my English teacher -- Natalie. So far as I think her class is the best English class. She boosts my confidence of speaking English. For instance, I only spend 2 months, My IELTS score improved from 4 to 6 points. Natalie's teaching method is different from other foreign teachers. She's class is full of passion, I can feel that she very loves her job and students. She never blames us , on the contrary, she treats us as friends. Sometimes she will shares her funny or upset things with us. In this friendly environment, we can learn english very easy and happy. Anyway, a good teacher is very crucial. Finally, I'll miss my teacher and classmates. This is the good memories of my life. I have a good teacher already, How about you ?

15 aug. 2011 07:39

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Farewell my English class

Today is a sad day, because my English course will end. I am grateful to my English teacher -- Natalie. So far as I think her class is the best English class. She boosts my confidence of speaking English. For instance, I only spend 2 months, My IELTS score improved from 4 to 6 points.

Natalie's teaching method is different from other foreign teachers. She's class is full of passion, I can feel that she very loves her job and students. She never blames us , on the contrary, she treats us as friends. Sometimes she will shares her funny or upset things with us. In this friendly environment, we can learn english very easy and happy. Anyway, a good teacher is very crucial.

Finally, I'll miss my teacher and classmates. This is the good memories of my life. I have a good teacher already, How about you ?

Your English is mostly correct. I’ve shown how I would write the same thing.

Today is a sad day, because my English course will end.

Today is a sad day because my English course is ending.

Your sentence is correct but I would write it differently. Unlike Chinese, English has a very strong sense of time, exactly when something happened in relation to the present.

My English course will end tomorrow. (it will end in the future)

My English course ends today. (It will come to an end today)

My English course will end today. (It will end a short time in the future)

My English course is ending today. (It is in the process of ending)

My English course ended yesterday.

Each sentence a slightly different sense of time in the mind of the speaker. This is pne unique characteristic of English. Another is a sense of number, that is, singular or plural, how many, etc.

I am grateful to my English teacher -- Natalie.

So far as I think her class is the best English class.

Your answer is OK.

I think she is the best teacher I’ve had so far.

I think hr class is the best English class I’ve had so far.

She boosts my confidence of speaking English.

..in speaking English.

For instance, I only spend 2 months, My IELTS score improved from 4 to 6 points.

…I spent only two months in her class and my IELTS score has improved by two points.

In only two months my IELTS score has risen from 4 to 6.

Natalie's teaching method is different from other foreign teachers.

Natalie’s teaching method is different from that of other teachers. (her method is not different from other teachers, but from the methods of other teachers)

She's class is full of passion,

Her class…

(I, you, he, she and they have different forms for the possessive,…my, your, his, her, their)

I can feel that she very loves her job and students.

She never blames us ,

She never criticizes us.

She never scolds us.

Your answer is OK but I would use a different word.

Blame emphasizes the finding of fault and the fixing of responsibility.

Criticize can mean to evaluate without necessarily finding fault but usually implies disapproval.

Scold means to find fault habitually and openly. It implies anger or irritation and the tone of one correcting a child at fault..

on the contrary, she treats us as friends.

Sometimes she will shares her funny or upset things with us.

Sometimes she shares with us things that she finds funny or upsetting.

(The use of will here is influenced by Chinese grammar, I think. Also, note how I used a subordinate clause at the end of the sentence,, a characteristic of a hypotactic (形合) language like English which uses coordinators (e.g. and, or, but, yet, so, however, as well as, either… or…, neither… nor…),subordinators (e.g. when, while, as, since, until, so… that…, unless, lest), relative pronouns and adverbs ( e.g. who, whom, whose, that, which, when, where, why, how), prepositions and others. Chinese, a paratactic (意合 ) language, arranges clauses one after the other without connectives showing the relationship between them. The meanings of different parts help indicate the relationship within a sentence.)

In this friendly environment, we can learn english very easy and happy.

…we can learn English very easily and enjoyably. (If you want to use happy, it would have to be happily, the adverb form because it modifies a verb.)

Anyway, a good teacher is very crucial.
Finally, I'll miss my teacher and classmates.

This is the good memories of my life. I have a good teacher already, How about you ?

I’ll have good memories of this time. I’ve had a good teacher.

20 augustus 2011

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