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IELTS Writing Task 2 Some people say that parks are worth investing to. However, others do not support this view. To what extend do you agree? The questions of what the role parks play and how it affects our mind are important for all of us. Hence, I feel that gardens offer a great opportunity to engage in recreational activities, and I will explain the reasons here. Firstly, it is a fact that outing spaces is an ideal place where you can have a blast with your intimate buddies. Take the park as a prime example. The youths can enjoy the theme parks, its great vibrant spots where they can engage in a variety of activities. Adults, also, can have a sip of coffee in cozy coffee shops that would be a perfect place to catch up on gossip and to chill out in a romantic or peaceful setting. Secondly, there is no doubt that gardens are an oasis of peace amid the frenzy and chaos of city life. After being up to neck in work, residents can enjoy the fresh, tranquil atmosphere and relax themselves by going for a stroll, getting a full lung of fresh air as well as appreciating the beauty of flowers and songs of the birds. It is clear that parks always give a number of precious opportunities to experience the stunning flora and fauna. Of course, those who say that some outing spaces could be noisy and overcrowded are quite correct too. Some people neither watch their own code of conduct nor behave in polite way. All of this could annoy residents and make them feel under pressure. However, simply conforming to the rules and regulations of the place we are paying a visit to can we show others we are well-mannered citizens. In conclusion, I would not wish to underestimate downsides of public places, including city gardens, as they attract hordes of locals and tourists, especially on nice sunny days. However, a visit to an amazing place for exhausted after a hard working day citizens is a kind of escape. (321 words)
8 mrt. 2020 19:41
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IELTS Writing Task 2

Some people say that parks are worth investing in. However, others do not support this view.
To what extent do you agree?


The questions of what <s>the </s>role parks play and how they affect<s>s</s> our mind are important for all of us. Hence, I feel that gardens offer a great opportunity to engage in recreational activities, and I will explain the reasons here.
Firstly, it is a fact that outside spaces are an ideal place where you can have a blast with your intimate buddies. Take the park as a prime example. The youth<s>s</s> can enjoy the theme parks, its great vibrant spots where they can engage in a variety of activities. Adults, also, can have a sip of coffee in cozy coffee shops that would be a perfect place to catch up on gossip and to chill out in a romantic or peaceful setting.
Secondly, there is no doubt that gardens are an oasis of peace amid the frenzy and chaos of city life. After being up to neck in work, residents can enjoy the fresh, tranquil atmosphere and relax themselves by going for a stroll, getting a full lung of fresh air as well as appreciating the beauty of flowers and songs of the birds. It is clear that parks always give a number of precious opportunities to experience the stunning flora and fauna.
Of course, those who say that some outside spaces could be noisy and overcrowded are quite correct too. Some people neither watch their own code of conduct nor behave in polite way. All of this could annoy residents and make them feel under pressure. However, simply by conforming to the rules and regulations of the place we are paying a visit to we can show others we are well-mannered citizens.
In conclusion, I would not wish to underestimate the downsides of public places, including city gardens, as they attract hordes of locals and tourists, especially on nice sunny days. However, a visit to an amazing place for exhausted citizens after a hard working day is a kind of escape.
(321 words)
12 maart 2020
You need to improve the pattern and pargraphs, as per IELTS requirements.
12 maart 2020
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