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The bar chart illustrates changes of situation of graduate unemployment at the age of 20-24 with both sexes of female and male in one European country in the period of 2008 and 2009.
In general, rate of unemployed graduates reached the highest in October of 2009 while the percentage of employed graduates was highest in April and July of 2008.
In January of 2008, men and women were out of work by 10% and approximately 8% respectively. However, these proportions varied which the numbers of men and women in April and July leveled , with 6% of unemployed female graduates and 8% unemployed male graduates. The amount of unemployment graduates rose to 16% for males and 11% for female in October 2008.
In some first months of 2009, the percentage of male graduates in unemployment was quite similar, namely 12.5% in January and April and remarkably the number of unemployed female graduates was quite low, at 6%. In July of 2009, both genders in employments status was not significantly different, with 11% for men and 10% for women. But these figures peaked in October, with 22% for men and 14% for women.
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The bar chart illustrates changes in unemployment among graduates ages 20-24 for both genders in one European country during the period of 2008 and 2009.
In general, the rate of unemployed graduates reached its highest point (or “peak”) in October of 2009 while the percentage of employed graduates was highest in April and July of 2008.
In January of 2008, men and women were out of work by 10% and approximately 8% respectively. However, these proportions varied as the numbers in April and July leveled, with 8% for male and 6% for female unemployed graduates. The number of unemployed graduates rose to 16% for males and 11% for females in October 2008.
During the first months of 2009, the percentage of unemployed male graduates remained similar at 12.5% in January and April. Remarkably, the number of unemployed female graduates was quite low at 6%. In July of 2009, the employment status for both genders was not significantly different (or “did not significantly change”) with 11% for men and 10% for women. However, these figures peaked in October with 22% for men and 14% for women.
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The bar chart illustrates changes in graduate unemployment at the ages of 20-24 for both females and males in one European country in the period of 2008 and 2009.
In general, the rate of unemployed graduates reached the highest in October of 2009 while the percentage of employed graduates was highest in April and July of 2008.
In January of 2008, the percentage of men and women who were out of work was approximately 10% and 8% respectively. However, these proportions varied as the numbers of unemployed men and women in April and July leveled off , with 6% unemployment for female graduates and 8% unemployment for male graduates. The number of unemployed graduates rose to 16% for males and 11% for female in October 2008.
In the first few months of 2009, the percentage of male graduates who were unemployed was quite similar, namely 12.5% in January and April while the number of unemployed female graduates was quite low at 6%. In July of 2009, the employment status for both genders was not significantly different, with 11% for men and 10% for women. But these figures peaked in October, with 22% for men and 14% for women.
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