A Translation.

I would appreciate if you take your time to correct it.

Good morning everyone. It is my great honor to accept this interview. At the beginning I would like to thank the leader for giving me this opportunity, and I am sure that I won’t let you down. My name is …… I am from Sichuan province, nicknamed “the land of abundance”. It is also one of the most habitable cities in China.

I graduated from Sichuan College of Architectural Technology in 2009, I’ve been working in Chongqing eighth construction engineering limited liability company, and responsible for salary and welfare management. By learning hard for three months, I am familiar with the policy of welfare. Furthermore, company leaders praised me for having a good contact with local related department.

When it comes to my personality, I am full of enthusiasm, and I treat people sincerely. In my daily life, I am optimistic and I have a lot of hobbies to enhance the quality of my life. No matter what we do or where we live, I take it seriously that when we communicate with others we should be honest and modest. I am capable of working in a team or on my own, so I am quite adaptable.

However, it is said that nobody is perfect. After I graduated, I didn’t have much chance to speak or use English. Given the weakness of oral aspect, I wonder if we could use Chinese in this interview. Thank you very much.

Very minor corrections, honesty changed to honest. Commas placed to make clauses clear. It is good for written English, not as important in speaking.

One question to you. Chongqing eighth construction engineering limited liability company  - Should this be capitalized? It is wise to consult the company documents, as companies choose specific spelling outside of grammar rules.  I suggest  Chongqing Eighth Construction Engineering, LLC. But if company spells different, use their spelling,

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A Translation.

I would appreciate if you take your time to correct it.

Good morning everyone. It is my great honor to accept this interview. At the beginning I would like to thank the leader for giving me this opportunity and I am sure that I won’t let you down. My name is …… I am from Sichuan province nicknamed “the land of abundance”. It is also one of the most habitable cities in China.

Since graduating from Sichuan College of Architectural Technology in 2009, I’ve been working in Chongqing eighth construction engineering limited liability company where I am responsible for salary and welfare management. By studying hard for three months, I made myself familiar with their welfare policy. Furthermore, I am praised by company leaders for having a good contact with local related departments.

Regarding my personality, I am full of enthusiasm and I treat people sincerely. In my daily life I am optimistic and I have a lot of hobbies to enhance the quality of my life. No matter what we do or where we live, I take it seriously that when we communicate with others we should be honesty and modest. I am capable of working in a team or on my own so that I am quite adaptable.

However, it is said that nobody is perfect. After graduation, I didn’t have much of a chance to speak or use English. Given the weakness in my oral skills, I wonder if we could continue this interview in Chinese.

Thank you very much.

Notes:

Just describe the company using the name. You can leave out the Ltd bit.
Alternatives "After graduation, I didn’t have much opportunity to speak or use English."

Good luck with the job interview Sarah. :)
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