please help me ^^ Hi , my teacher gave me a homework and i tried to do it ,but i'm not sure of it's answers, so i need your help . the homework is two paragraphs which have many mistakes in vocabular

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please help me ^^ Hi , my teacher gave me a homework and i tried to do it ,but i'm not sure of it's answers, so i need your help . the homework is two paragraphs which have many mistakes in vocabulary not in grammar ,i need the answers and the explanations <<please ^^ : 1- Jack Forest is a baker who always provides his customers with tough meat . Last Tuesday ,Mrs Brown came into the shop and asked for three fillets of brown bread .Unfortunately ,Jack only had two fillets remaining .He excused Mrs brown and promised her that he would have too much bread the next time she came . Mrs Brown , being a reliable customers ,assured Jack that she would return .Later that day , Jack was sealing the shop when he heard the phone sang .It was Mrs brown requiring if Jack had baked another slice of brown bread. Jack said ,"As a matter of truth , I burnt some extra loaves a few hours ago . Would you like me to bring one buy ?" .Mrs Brown said she would and so Jack got into his bike and rode to Mrs Brown's to deliver the third pound of brown toast . 2- My favorite reptile is the cheetah .It is truly an amazing creature which can trot at a top speed of 60 m.p.h ! I've always wanted to go to the cool planes of Africa to see the cheetah in action .I imagine it would be a disappointing experience looking at those cheetah run . A few weeks ago , I was watching a National Geographic special in the radio and my wife said ,"Why don't we go to Africa next summer ?". I hopped for joy! "That's a lousy idea !",I stated . Well,next week our plain leaves for Africa and i can hardly imagine that we are going to Africa at first.

1 okt. 2012 18:54

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Ok, so this is what I think :)

1- Jack Forest is a baker who always provides his customers with tough meat (bread, because he's a baker) . Last Tuesday ,Mrs Brown came into the shop and asked for three fillets(loaves, because we're talking about bread, not meat) of brown bread .Unfortunately ,Jack only had two fillets (loaves, the same as above) remaining .He excused Mrs brown and promised her that he would have too much(I would put here ''some extra'') bread the next time she came . Mrs Brown , being a reliable customers ,assured Jack that she would return .Later that day , Jack was sealing(closing, you can seal a package, not a shop) the shop when he heard the phone sang(rang, phones dont sing) .It was Mrs Brown requiring if Jack had baked another slice(loaf, not slice) of brown bread. Jack said ,"As a matter of truth(fact, we don't say truth in this sentence) , I burnt(baked, because burnt would mean they're not eatable) some extra loaves a few hours ago . Would you like me to bring one buy(I don't know why is ''buy'' even here) ?" .Mrs Brown said she would and so Jack got into(onto) his bike and rode to Mrs Brown's to deliver the third pound(three loaves) of brown toast(bread, because Mrs Brown wanted bread, not toasts)

2- My favorite reptile(animal, cheetah cannot be a reptile) is the cheetah .It is truly an amazing creature which can trot(run, I think it is more appropriate) at a top speed of 60 m.p.h ! I've always wanted to go to the cool planes(hot deserts, savanna?) of Africa to see the cheetah in action .I imagine it would be a disappointing(amazing, satisfactory) experience looking at those cheetah run . A few weeks ago , I was watching a National Geographic special in the radio(TV, we cannot watch the radio..) and my wife said ,"Why don't we go to Africa next summer ?". I hopped for joy! "That's a lousy(great, lousy would mean we're not happy) idea !",I stated . Well,next week our plain leaves for Africa and i can hardly imagine that we are going to Africa at first.