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nightmare i made a lot bad dream lately,and idon't know why. one night i dreamed i lost an arm, seem be right arm. really scare me ...when i wake up and realize that was a dream,i'm so glad...i can't imagine what can i do if that kind of thing real happen. another night , i dreamed i become baldheaded.... strange, why i have a dream like that? it's so real,and terrible... even more terrible then lose arm. and...i wish everybady on earth (also mars) safely and healthy... no war ,no fight,no harm.

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I've been having a lot of bad dreams lately and  I am not sure why.

One night I had a dream that I lost an arm. It seemed to be my right arm. It really scare me, then I woke up and realized it was just a dream. I am so glad. I can't imagine what  I would do if something like that really happened.

A different night I had a dream that I went bald. I wonder why I had a strange dream like that. It was so real and terrifying, even more terrifying then loosing an arm. 

Well, I wish everyone on Earth(and also Mars) health and safety as well as no wars, fights, or harm.

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Nightmare

I had made a lot of bad dreams lately and I don't know why.

One night I dreamed I lost an arm. It seem to be my right arm. It really had scared  me ...When I woke up and realized that it was just a dream, i'm so glad....I was relief. I can't imagine what I can I do if that kind of thing really happens.

Another night , I dreamed i became baldheaded.... Strange, why i have did I a dream something like that? It's so real,and terrible terrifying... even more terrible terrifying than then lose loosing an arm.

and So...I wish everybody on earth (and also mars) safely and healthy... No wars, no fights, and no harm.
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I added how I would of wrote it your story. Not as if I was speaking to a friend but similar to what I would type in an e-mail. Just to give you another view. Your doing great.

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