Don't give up!! Your English is great, the test must just be very difficult. :/ Keep studying. When I read your notebooks, the only problem I see a lot is that you use very long sentences. In English, sentences are not only one idea, but each idea is separated by a comma (,). You are doing that very, very well. However, only a few ideas can go into one sentence. When I was little and learning to write, my teacher told us that a period (.) was a point for the reader to stop and breath. I think you need a few more of those. :) It looks like you're missing a verb here and there or the verb wasn't used correctly, but I can understand what you were trying to say, I think. :) Don't give up! Just keep trying - you're bound to get that "7" soon. ^-^ How high can you score on the IELTS?