paragraph about a recent restaurant experience , try to includ descriptions of the meal , service

I went to the new Indian restaurant last friday . the food was fabulous especially the appetizers and the checken was cooked to perfection , the sevice was excellent , my table was ready for me as soon as I arrived , also the waiters were very attentive and the ambiance was cozy and relaxing , I can not wait to go back again .


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Paragraph about a recent restaurant experience, I tried to include descriptions of the meal, and service

I went to the new Indian restaurant last friday. The food was fabulous especially the appetizers and the chicken was cooked to perfection, the sevice was excellent, and my table was ready for me as soon as I arrived. Also the waiters were very attentive and the ambiance was cozy and relaxing, I can not (can't) wait to go back again.

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Paragraph about a recent restaurant experience , try to includ descriptions of the meal , service

I went to the new Indian restaurant last Friday . The food was fabulous, especially the appetizers and the chicken was cooked to perfection. The sevice was excellent, and my table was ready for me as soon as I arrived. Also, the waiters were very attentive and the ambiance was cozy and relaxing. I can not wait to go back again .


Corrections please

Thank you

<em>[Good work.  Shorten your sentences - don't string so many indendent phrases together with commas.]</em>