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A formal letter I have to write for homeworks 

I have to write a formal letter about the bad service services I recieved had received in a hotel. Here is it is:

I have to write a formal letter about the bad services I had received in a hotel. Here it is:

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with of the serive services I recived had received in the Han hotel Hotel of Murcia last week.

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction of the services I had received in the Han Hotel of Murcia last week. 

It was my first time I came to check in this hotel, but and I had good recommendations from about it and besides, it has is four stars. My disappointment started the first day when I came to the hotel. The room that I reserved was not appropriately ready because the bed has had only a thin blanket without any duvet. On many occasions I called the room services service, but they did not come  until the next day, so that I spent a terrible cold night because of that, and also the fact that the heating was removed.

It was my first time to check in this hotel, and I had good recommendations about it and besides, it is four stars. My disappointment started the first day when I came to the hotel. The room that I reserved was not appropriately ready because the bed had only a thin blanket without any duvet. On many occasions I called the room service, but they did not come until the next day, so that I spent a terrible cold night because of that, and also the fact that the heating was removed. 

Another thing made me I'm disappointed was the restaurant, because there were many people and it was ridiculously small, so that we spent much more time waiting in the queue.

Another thing made me disappointed was the restaurant, because there were many people and it was ridiculously small, so that we spent more time waiting in the queue.

I have been in some other hotels about with the same quality star level and I never had so many inconvenients inconveniences. So unless I recieve receive and an explanation and apology for the unacceptable service services I had recieved, I will not recomment recommend that this hotel to any of my friends.

I have been in some other hotels with the same star level and I never had so many inconveniences. So unless I receive an explanation and apology for the unacceptable services I had recieved, I will not recommend this hotel to any of my friends. 

Yours faithfully.