My college

I still vividly remember my first day of college.The first day of college It started with me missing the bus to JiangXi Police College and ending up taking a taxi(It was my bad luck that I took one of those cheapskate taxi drivers because he asked me for 150yuan). I doubted whether I could get there on time, but luckily I was wrong; however, three(write out numbers less than 10) of my roommates had already arrived. That night, I sat next to my roommates and just waited for our teacher,Miss Wang.I looked around to see my classmates and noticed two things: Number one, the girls are hot and number two, they are my classmates. These are the very people that I would will have to either compete with or have my best years with.
Well, The campus is huge, so I did often get lost. that’s for sure.What caught my attention when I first stepped onto the campus was the library! I mean it looked really big and spectacular. At that moment,I thought my college life would be wonderful. After the military training,the first week was introduction week and we had to introduce ourselves to the class. As each individual shared a little something about themselves I learned that we are all creative in our own ways and(don't start a sentence with and) we are all here to activate that creativity to achieve the best from it. From there I made new friends. Some shared the same passions and some had different ones.  But it’s cool, our differences of interest are simply another thing that makes life more unique.And The lecturers here are friendly and they make loads of jokes. You can see that they just want to help us enjoy our time studying here.
College is a place for us to study,to improve our social skills,to make friends and so on. As an English major student,on the one hand,I choose to write and to keep diaries,and because I think it’s a really good way to train myself to think in English. On the other hand, it’s important for me to read more books. You know,We have such a spectacular library and we are supposed to make full use of it,you know, to get different information to that will deepen(enrich) our knowledge system and to broaden our horizons as well,and to as give us potentials topics to talk about.
Recently,I went to see a the film whose name was 致青春，it was directed by 赵薇.It was really a really good film. University days are unforgettable,whether for love,friendship or study. I believe it is the most beautiful memory in our heart. Well,the last thing is I want to enjoy every moment here!

Good work! This is a long essay and I hope I didn't make any mistakes in correcting it. If you have any questions I'll be glad to try to answer them. College life is great, I miss those days! My daughter just finished her first year of college and I tell her to enjoy it while it last.

Your english is very clear. Just make sure you watch your spaces after punctuation marks. You need a space after periods and commas. Example:

I doubted whether I could get there on time,but luckily I was wrong.However,3 of my roommates had already arrived.

I doubted whether I could get there on time, but luckily I was wrong. However, 3 of my roommates had already arrived.