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I'm back。。。。 週はそれで忙しかったね。私の劇場は九時約でしたね、最後の日昨日でした。 私の劇場それでいい。 last week I was so busy .I was in my theater about 9 hours,yesterday was the last day. My theater was so good
26 mei 2013 17:15
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I'm back。。。。

週はそれでとても忙しかった。私劇場九時間ほどでしたねいて昨日は最後の日( or 最終日)昨日でした。
私の劇場それでとてもいいです
last week I was so busy .I was in my theater about 9 hours,yesterday was the last day.
My theater was so good

 

9 hours sounds pretty long but nice to know that you love what you do!

please ask  me anytime if you have any questions :)

 

Kaori x

27 mei 2013

I'm back。。。。

週はそれで忙しかった。私劇場は九時ごろ劇場にでし最後の日昨日は最後の日でしだった。* 

*(最後の日でした is very good. I corrected it because other sentences are written in informal way.) 

私の劇(or 舞台) はよかった場それでいい

 

last week I was so busy .I was in my theater about 9:00,yesterday was the last day.
My theater was so good

 

 

Hi Jhonatan, 

Keep up your study! がんばって!

27 mei 2013
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