Search from various Engels teachers...
Ricardo
A memorable night Pelease you can correct this text, it is an exercise for my English class A memorable night for me was a night in Tunisia. I was on holiday with my partner and friends, was 14 years ago. When we were visiting a bazar, we saw a póster for a concert in a nearby town, played Taraf of Haidouks, they are a band of Romanian gypsies, we liked my partner and me, was fortuna te to see the póster and they played there, because they don't play in Spain almost never. Of course we went to the concert, only my partner and me because our friend didn't like. The weather was fantastic at nigth, but during the day it was very hot. Luckily the concert esa at night in amphitheater. It was a grieta concert, we finished dancing on stage and taking photos with de band. I don't remember what time we arrived at the hotel, but was later. It was a memorable nigth for all that and because I haven't gone back a concert of them.
1 mei 2014 16:06
Correcties · 5
1

A memorable night

Pelease you can correct this text, it is an exercise for my English class

A memorable night for me was 14 years ago,  a night in Tunisia. 
I was on holiday with my partner and our friends, was 14 years ago.
When we We were visiting a bazar, when we saw a póster poster advertising a concert for the band Taraf of Haidouks, in a nearby town. , played Taraf of Haidouks, they They are a band of Romanian gypsies, that we liked my partner and me I liked. We were was fortunate to see the póster poster and be there at the same time they played, because they hardly ever play in Spain. and they played there, because they don't play in Spain almost never.

Of course, we went to the concert but only my partner and me because our friends didn't like the band.

The weather was fantastic at nigth that night, but during the day it was had been very hot. Luckily the concert esa was at night in an amphitheater.

It was a grieta great concert, and we finished up dancing on stage and taking photos with de the band.

I don't remember what time we arrived at returned to the hotel, but was much later in the evening.

It was a memorable nigth night for all that those reasons and because I haven't gone back to Taraf of Haidouks concert of them since then.

1 mei 2014

A One Memorable Night

 

Pelease you can you correct this? text, It is an exercise for my English class.

A memorable night for me was a the one night in Tunisia. I was on holiday with my partner [Just to let you know that in current English, this means your boyfriend, implying you are gay.  If you didn't mean this, you have to be more specific, say "business partner"] and friends. This/It was 14 years ago.


When While at a bazzar, we were visiting a bazar, we saw a poster for a concert in a nearby town. played Taraf of Haidouks, they are a band of Romanian Gypsy was playing.  , we liked My partner and me, was felt fortunate te to see chance upon the poster and they played there, because they since this band /hardly/rarely/seldom/ don't play perform in Spain almost never.

Of course we went to the concert, only my partner and me because but our friends didn't; as they didn't like them. [or, "as they were not their favorite band"]

The night weather was fantastic at nigth, but during the day it was very too hot. Luckily the concert esa was held at night in the amphitheater.

It was a grieta great concert. We finished ended up dancing on the stage and taking photos with the de band.

I don't remember what time we arrived at returned to the hotel, but was sure it must be very later.

It was a very memorable nigth night for me but all that and because I haven't gone back being to another a concert [of theirs] since then. of them.

1 mei 2014
Wil je sneller vooruitgang boeken?
Word nu lid van deze leer-community en probeer de gratis oefeningen uit!