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Anna Zelenskaya
我的风格 (My style) 我比骄傲喜欢带蓝色的衣服 - I prefer to wear blue clothing 我不太喜欢穿撞色的衣服 - I don't really like to wear clothes of contrast colors 我喜欢中性的风格 - I like unisex style 但是我不太时常穿中性的服装 - But I don't wear unisex clothing so often 我觉得我穿中性的服装看起来不太好看 - I believe that if I am wearing unisex clothing it does not look good 我很喜欢波西米亚的风格 - 又好看,有舒服 - I really like bohemian style - it is both good looking and comfortable 我觉得,现在朋克的风格比较火 - I believe that punk style is quite hot nowadays 但是我一点儿都不喜欢朋克的分割 - But I don't like punk style at all 我很喜欢休闲装,不过正装榜公示更适合 - I really like casual clothing, but formal clothes are more suitable to wear in the office 如果我穿裙子和高跟鞋,看起来很美 - If I am wearing skirt and high heels I am looking really good

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我的风格 (My style)

我比骄傲喜欢带蓝色的衣服 - I prefer to wear blue clothing (i prefer the clothing with blue colour. “i prefer to wear blue clothing”, that means:我比较喜欢穿蓝色的衣服。)
我不太喜欢穿撞色的衣服 - I don't really like to wear clothes of contrast colors
我喜欢中性的风格 - I like unisex style
但是我不太时常穿中性的服装 - But I don't wear unisex clothing so often
我觉得我穿中性的服装看起来不太好看 - I believe that if I am wearing unisex clothing it does not look good
我很喜欢波西米亚的风格 - 又好看,有舒服 - I really like bohemian style - it is both good looking and comfortable
我觉得,现在朋克的风格比较火 - I believe that punk style is quite hot nowadays
但是我一点儿都不喜欢朋克的分割风格) - But I don't like punk style at all
我很喜欢休闲装,不过正装榜公示(办公室)更适合 - I really like casual clothing, but formal clothes are more suitable to wear in the office
如果我穿裙子和高跟鞋,看起来很美 - If I am wearing skirt and high heels I am looking really good

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我的风格 (My style)

比较喜欢带蓝色的衣服 - I prefer to wear blue clothing
我不太喜欢穿撞色的衣服 - I don't really like to wear clothes of contrast colors
我喜欢中性的风格 - I like unisex style
但是我不太时常穿中性的服装 - But I don't wear unisex clothing so often
我觉得我穿中性的服装看起来不太好看 - I believe that if I am wearing unisex clothing it does not look good
我很喜欢波西米亚的风格 - 又好看,有舒服 - I really like bohemian style - it is both good looking and comfortable
我觉得,现在朋克的风格比较火 - I believe that punk style is quite hot nowadays
但是我一点儿都不喜欢朋克的风格 - But I don't like punk style at all
我很喜欢休闲装,不过在办公室穿正装更适合 - I really like casual clothing, but formal clothes are more suitable to wear in the office
如果我穿裙子和高跟鞋,看起来很美 - If I am wearing skirt and high heels I am looking really good

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I prefer to say 對比色 instead of 撞色. I prefer to say 辣 instead of 火. By the way, 撞衫 means wearing the same clothes as another.
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写的不错,只有个别地方需要修改。
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我的风格 (My style)

我比骄傲(较)喜欢(穿)蓝色的衣服 - I prefer to wear blue clothing
我不太喜欢穿撞色的衣服 - I don't really like to wear clothes of contrast colors
我喜欢中性的风格 - I like unisex style
但是我太时常穿中性的服装时候不多 - But I don't wear unisex clothing so often
我觉得我穿中性的服装看起来不太好看 - I believe that if I am wearing unisex clothing it does not look good
我很喜欢波西米亚的风格 - 又好看,(又)舒服 - I really like bohemian style - it is both good looking and comfortable 

我觉得,现在朋克的风格比较火 - I believe that punk style is quite hot nowadays
但是我一点儿都不喜欢朋克的分割(风格) - But I don't like punk style at all
我很喜欢休闲装,不过正装榜公示更适合(于办公室) - I really like casual clothing, but formal clothes are more suitable to wear in the office
如果我穿裙子和高跟鞋,看起来很美 - If I am wearing skirt and high heels I am looking really good

 

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