About my Country (Venezuela)

There are a lot of good people in my country, but, the the government is very bad. But it does not matter. There are many beautiful places, beaches, and mountains. Life is very expensive here. So many people want to emigrate, but I love Venezuela.

Hola Maria!  Michael was perfect with his corrections.  I think you both missed this tiny correction.  99% of the time you do not put a comma after a Conjunction.  And never one before and one after. 

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Otherwise, great Job!

Rob

About my Country (Venezuela) 

There are a lot of good people in my country, but, the the government is very bad. But it does not matter. There are many beautiful places, beaches, and mountains. Life is very expensive here. So many people want to emigrate, but I love Venezuela.

<em>Bien hecho!, Michael</em>