The Weather

Today's it's raining and cold - the sky's is grey and I don't like it this. because it's looks like it is sad outside an sad weather. There is nobody inside and even the birds are silent brirds're stay on the silence. We can just hear the noise of cars noise. Add to that the fact that the shops are shop're closing on Sunday; what can I do then for that? Nothing! I think that all I will be able to do is to just looking through in the window and be patient patience. Maybe tomorrow the weather'll will be better.

A good effort - well done.

-You have tried to use far too many contractions (and actually a lot of the ones that you have tried to use don't exist (or you've used incorretly) so it doesn't really make sense). You should try and write without contrations because the meaning will be clearer and then after you've got the hang of doing that you should move onto using them. :)