Student's life in Korea :)

At break time, some guys ate their lunch box even though they would have to listen to more class by lunch time(not sure what you mean by this). Because the playground(in America a playground is associated with elementary school, it's for little kids to play in) is not as big as America's. So competition for getting a spot at the playground is really 치열. That's why they eat their lunch box early. Some guys eat their lunch box during the class session very secretly. That is bad behavior and if they get caught by the teacher, they get punished, so this is very risky. But you know, for getting certain things we have to take risks.

I don't know exactly nowadays Korean school's system, but maybe many schools have used catering service for lunch and dinner. Usually Korean high school students eat dinner in school, because they should(unless you mean it's required) attend a self study class in school. Back in 2004 when I was in first grade in high school my freshman year, I usually studied in school until 10:00 pm. When I started to get older I started to stay more in school, finally I had to stay to study until 12:00 pm. I felt like I at school at that time. :)


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You did well! I stay in school until 2:20 pm and then study for an hour, haha I guess we are really lazy here. Schools are closed by 10:00 pm , they are long closed by 5:00 pm if anything.

Student's life in Korea :)

In [At/During]* break time, some guys eat their lunch box even though they have [to listen attend]** more classes by before lunch time. Because The [playground]*** is not as big as they are America, so there is a lot of competition for getting playground is really 치열. That's why they eat their lunch box early. Some guys eat their lunch box during the session very secreatly. That is bad behavior, and if he is they are caught from by the teacher, they get a punishment punished, so this it is very risky. But you know, [in order to achieve grander things]**** for getting a big thing, we have to take risks.

I don't know exactly what Korean school's system is like nowadays, but maybe many schools use have used catering service for lunch and dinner. Usually, Korean high school students eat dinner in school, because they should attend self-study classes in school. Back in 2004, when I was in my first year at high school, I usually studied in school until 10:00 pm. When I was getting As I got older, I should stayed more in school longer. Finally I had to stay for to study until 12:00 pm. I had felt like I lived at school at that time. :)


Please correct my note. Thanks in advance :)

[At/During]* Here, you can use either "at" or "during". Both make sense.

[to listen attend]** You can say, "they have to attend more classes before lunch time", or you can omit the word "to attend", and say, "they have more classes before lunch time".

[playground]*** The word "playground" is often associated with younger children (an area where there are swings, slides, jungle gyms, et cetera). Perhaps the word you are looking for is closer to "[court]yard"?

[in order to achieve grander things]**** This can be worded many different ways. It's a little difficult to articulate what you're trying to say in colloquial English.

I hope this helps!