Hi, I didn't listen to the whole thing but I can make a couple of comments based on what I did hear. Your grammar & vocabulary were correct & appropriate. Your use of the expression "find a job" was not 100% right. You repeatedly use complex grammar correctly. 1 area where you may want to try to improve is in pronunciation. Specifically, your intonation felt a little off to me. As I am sure you know, different languages have different rhythm and "music." Your intonation felt very influenced by your native language. If you would like to discuss it further, send me a message.