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first time this is the first time to write something like this, I don't know if it make any sense.. today I made a deal with the devil he promised me power and happiness a contract of three pages was signed no coming back now, no heaven, only forgiveness I can seek *** the first page is titled with my name second page, sharp edges, purple lines no time to read, third page, final page empty as the space he said to me with a smile on his face this is what you really get fill it now with all your regret
25 nov. 2014 20:39
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first time

this is the first time I've written something like this.   I don't know if it makes any sense.. 

today I made a deal with the devil
he promised me power and happiness
a contract of three pages was signed
no coming back now,
no heaven,
only forgiveness can I seek

the first page has my name on it,
second page,
sharp edges, purple lines
no time to read,
third page, final page
empty as the space
he said to me with a smile on his face
this is what you really get
fill it in now with all your regret

3 december 2014
1

first time

this is the first time to write I have written something like this, so I don't know if it makes any sense..

today I made a deal with the devil
he promised me power and happiness
a contract of three pages was signed
no coming back now,
no heaven,
only forgiveness I can seek
***
the first page is titled with my name
second page,
sharp edges, purple lines
no time to read,
third page, final page
empty as the space
he said to me with a smile on his face
this is what you really get
fill it now with all your regret

 

You seem to have a real knack for free-form poetry :) I hope to see more of these in the future!

3 december 2014
1

first time

this is the first time to write something like this, I don't know if it makes any sense..

today I made a deal with the devil
he promised me power and happiness
a contract of three pages was signed
no coming back now,
no heaven,
only forgiveness I can seek
***
the first page is titled with my name
second page,
sharp edges, purple lines
no time to read,
third page, final page
empty as the space
he said to me with a smile on his face
this is what you really get
fill it now with all your regret

25 november 2014
i like it thanks bro )
3 december 2014
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