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Went shopping My mother visited me yesterday to go shopping for choosing the end year gift. After we bought it, we had lunch and enjoyed some shopping. Although it wasn't enough time to talk about all of these days, we refreshed.
22 dec. 2014 01:59
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Went shopping

My mother visited me yesterday to shop for an go shopping for choosing the end of the year gift.
After we bought it, we had lunch and then enjoyed more some shopping.
Although it wasn't enough time to talk about everything from recent all of these days, we refreshed our memories.

22 december 2014

My mother visited me yesterday, and we decided to go shopping to choose the end of year gift.
After we bought the gift, we enjoyed having lunch together and went for some shopping.
Although it wasn't enough time to talk about all of these days, we refreshed ???

 

The first sentence has an error with preposition. The last sentence does not make sense. You need to make it more clear.

 

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22 december 2014
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