Hussain
My visit to a new city Hello and welcome every body, this is my first notebook here and I am trying my best to learn English. today I would like to talk about my business trip yesterday, it was to one of universities around my town 'Riyadh'. 150 kilometers away . I and two of my colleagues take the road by a car. we did 2 meetings there. one was disappointing and the other was really good. after the the meeting we had our lunch in a historical place there called 'Audat Sudair' it was very good. there was only the silence, no any kind of pollution and that was what we are looking for. we spent 3 hours there and just get our car back to home . thanks
22 dec. 2014 07:13
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My visit to a new city

Hello and welcome every body,
this is my first notebook here and I am trying my best to learn English.
today I would like to talk about my business trip yesterday, it was to one of universities around my town 'Riyadh'. 150 kilometers away .

I and two of my colleagues took the road by car, where we attended 2 meetings there. one was disappointing and the other was really good.

after the the meeting we had our lunch in a historical place there called 'Audat Sudair' and it was very good. there was only silence, not any kind of pollution, which was what we were looking for. we spent 3 hours there and just left by our car back home .

thanks

22 december 2014
1

My visit to a new city

Hello and welcome everybody,
this is my first notebook here and I am trying my best to learn English.
Today I would like to talk about my business trip yesterday, it was to one of the universities around my town 'Riyadh', 150 kilometers away .

I Myself and two of my colleagues take took to the road by a car. We did had 2 meetings there. One was disappointing and the other was really good.

After the the meeting we had our lunch in at a historical place there called 'Audat Sudair' it which was very good. There was only the silence, no any kind of pollution and that was what we were looking for. We spent 3 hours there and just get then took our car back to home .

 

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22 december 2014
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