Planting trees

Some people think that it is more important to plant more trees in open areas in towns and cities than to provides more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent The last 50 years have seen a considerable increase in the number of houses built. However, some people argue that it is more important to plant trees in open areas, instead of building than to build more houses. I agree with this view, and I think we should encourage in planting trees, especially in large cities.

First, it is obvious that planting trees has a positive impact on our living environment. Trees are more common to find in suburban areas, which could makes the place these parts of the city more liveable for most people. Trees can absorb carbon dioxide and create oxygen, thereby improving the air quality in cities. People living in cities in which planted plenty of trees have been planted are less likely suffer respiratory diseases caused by polluted air, smog and fumes. This is important because traveling by cars has become a major means of transport nowadays in most cities.

Moreover, a large area with trees provides people with an ideal place for relaxing and entertainment recreation. This is because in winter,  that trees block the gale wind and cold in winter, and in summer  resist protect from the heat in summer (better:  offer shade from the heat). For example, a square with plenty of trees near my house are is normally full of people taking regular exercising and dancing there. Besides, people getting to close to the greenery nature can help people feel peaceful (better: relax), which is beneficial to their mental healthy.

However, this is not to say that there is are no drawbacks of to planting trees. (the following are not drawbacks, but rather reasons why it may not be practical) By contrast, many cities today may face the problem of shortage of housing shortages. This means that there is are no more places for planting trees (better:  to plant trees). More specifically, some of existing trees should be cut down in order to produce make place space for houses.

In conclusion, planting trees can improve our living conditions and also provide a good place for people who (better: to) participate in outdoor activities. So, it is important to plant more trees in cities although the shortage of land may present a dilemma (better: challenge) for (local) governments.

Note:  most of these are minor corrections.  The biggest difficulties I see are the use of plurals (area instead of areas, and subject - verb agreement (there is drawbacks instead of there are drawbacks).  Keep up the good work!