Who I am?
Hey! My name is María and I'm from Venezuela. I'm 18 years old and I study Education at the University of Carabobo (I'm going to be a literature teacher)... I have been studying English for 3 or 4 months and I like it!
About my likes and dislikes... I love the arts in general: music, theater, dance, literature, and so on... I was a contemporany dancer for 11 years but I left the dance because I have some problems with my knees, this is very difficult for me :( Well... I don't like to practice sports haha but I like watch these on tv.
I'm an agnostic person, I love my dogs, I like to go to the beach and the mountains and I like to meet people from differents countries... I would like to learn another languages like French, German or
Portuguese...
An excellent text Maria. Just a few points worth mentioning: Languages/Countries/Proper Names should always start with a capital letter. You need to before the verb to go. Mountains is usually mentioned in the plural and preceded by the definite article. An agnostic can only be a person so the word is superfluous. One final point you have spelled theatre in the American English way rather than my version in British English - the choice is yours but you need to be aware.
Well, what do you think about my English?
Who I am?
Hey! My name is María and I'm from Venezuela. I'm 18 years old and I study Education at the University of Carabobo (I'm going to be a literature teacher)... I have been studying english for 3 or 4 months and I like it!
About my likes and dislikes... I love the arts in general: music, theater, dance, literature, and so on... I was a contemporany dancer for 11 years but I left the dance because I have some problems with my knees, this is very difficult for me :( Well... I don't like to practice sports haha but I like watch these them on tv.
I'm an agnostic person, I love my dogs, I like go to the beach and mountains and I like to meet people from differents countries... I would like to learn another languages like french, german or portuguese...
Well, what do you think about my English?
Your English is very good!!
