Task 2 Write text. Words to use: advantage, mention, to regard, striking, to determine, determination, to insist on, needle, meticulous, to stand out for, peer pressure, to be offered a place, to take

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Task 2 Write text. Words to use: advantage, mention, to regard, striking, to determine, determination, to insist on, needle, meticulous, to stand out for, peer pressure, to be offered a place, to take one's a while. One usual monday morning a unknown girl had come into the classroom, what drew attention of everyone inside. She was offered a place at the first desk by Mr. Jakes, what was a real advantage on the math classes, but Julie insisted on the girl's sitting beside her. Newcomer girl had preferred the second variant and with quiet determination took the place near to Julie. It is took Julie a while to meet she closer, because she definitely stood out for others.This girl was so beautiful, gentle, as slim as a needle. At the same time, she was striking diligent and was meticulous noting all professor's words. But why did this girl make her appearance here in the middle of the school term? Once she mentioned that she was under the pressure at her last college and she determined to change it. On the contrary, here everyone regarded she as an ideal student and was nice to her.

3 mei 2015 08:26

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Task 2

Write text. Words to use: advantage, mention, to regard, striking, to determine, determination, to insist on, needle, meticulous, to stand out for, peer pressure, to be offered a place, to take one's a while.

One usual [typical / normal] monday morning an unknown girl had come into the classroom, what she drew the attention of everyone inside. She was offered a place at the first desk by Mr. Jakes, what which was a real advantage on in the maths classes, but Julie insisted on the girl's sitting beside her. Newcomer girl had preferred the second variant [option] and with quiet determination took the place near to Julie. It is took Julie a while to meet she get closer, because she definitely stood out for from the others. This girl was so beautiful, gentle, and as slim as a needle. At the same time, she was strikingly diligent and was taking meticulous noting notes of all the professor's words. But why did this girl make her appearance here in the middle of the school term? Once she mentioned that she was under the pressure at her last college and she determined to change it. On the contrary, here everyone regarded she as an ideal student and was nice to her.