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I've Got a Cold
I've tasted what it's like with a 40°C fever. The day before yesterday I was alone at home. At first I just felt uncomfortable and a little tired so I go to bed very early, probably 7:00pm. Then I started to feel dizzy and my body is burning and I kept waking up in the nightmare. I supposed I must go to the hospital. When I arrived I found I take another jacket and I forgot my money. So I had to walk another mile in the rainy midnight. It's terrible.
After my first experience of intravenous drip my fever is gone, but my throat still hurts and I don’t stop coughing.
Now it's the peak season for influenza. Please take care, unlike me.
Lastly, Happy New Chinese Year! 过年好!
11 feb. 2011 07:30
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I Caught a Cold
Now I know what it's like to have a 40°C fever. The day before yesterday I was home alone. At first I just felt uncomfortable and a little tired so I went to bed very early, probably 7:00pm. Then I started to feel dizzy and my body felt like it was burning up and I kept waking up from nightmares. I thought<strike> </strike>I should go to the hospital. When I arrived at the hospital I realized I should have taken another jacket and I forgot my money too. So I had to walk an extra mile in the rain, at midnight. It was terrible.After my first IV was done, <strike>but</strike> my throat still hurt<strike>s</strike> and I couldn't stop coughing.
It's now the peak season for influenza. Please take care of yourself better than I did.
<strike>Lastly, </strike>Happy New Chinese Year!
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11 februari 2011
Not just busy, but also a bad day.
12 februari 2011
Is that your door? What is "Gelivable?"
11 februari 2011
呵呵 You have a busy day. You need take care of yourself .
11 februari 2011
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