My night

I am happy. Yesterday, my best friend became married with her boyfriend of 4, years or maybe 5 years. It was great; we danced, sang, and have had great fun. Now it is 7:45, and I will try to sleep after a long night of dancing and fun.

My night

I am happy. Yesterday, my best friend became got married with her boyfriend of 4 years, or maybe 5. It was great! We danced, sang and had great fun. Now, it is 7:45 AM, I will try to sleep after a long night of dancing and fun.

Well done, just a few minor errors! Keep it up ;-)