My travel experience

In my spanih holy week i was in Madrid to spend my holidays
I went with my best friend and it was our first travel together.
We stay in a hotel in 'Puerta del Sol' so we were in the centre of Madrid and we could go shopping and saw the most important mounouments in the center.
Also we had a lot of cheaps restaurant and fast food restaurant near our hotel.
I like to travel and one of my dream is to travel around the world during a hole year and visit no famous places where no pleaple have been before.
I like to know different coulturist and diferrent type of food.

My travel experience

During Spanish Holy Week I spent a week in Madrid. 

I went with my best friend and it was our first trip together. We stayed in a hotel in 'Puerta del Sol' so we were in the centre of Madrid and we could go shopping and saw the most important monuments in the city centre.Also we had a lot of cheaps restaurants and fast food restaurants near our hotel.
I like to travel and one of my dreams is to travel around the world for a wholeyear and visit famous places where few people have been before. I like to discover different cultures and diferrent types of food.

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