Original text in italics, my corrections in normal format, and notes pre-ceeded with a ‘--‘
<em>Today I went to English meeting conversation.</em>
Today I went to an English conversation meeting.
<em>There were some people I know, but I haven't been there for a long time so, all of them seemed strange for me.</em>
I knew some of the people there, but I haven’t been there for a while so they all seemed unfamiliar to me.
<em>I met a weird guy who lived a year in Ireland.</em>
I met a guy who lived in Ireland for a year.
-- Why was he weird? It’s better to say exactly why you thought he was weird.
<em>There was a girl who I always saw her in some pictures on facebook's group.</em>
There was a girl who I always see in pictures on the group’s Facebook profile.
<em>I thought she was starting learning speak English, but I heard her speaking and she spoke very well.</em>
I thought she was just starting to learn to speak English, but I heard her speaking and she spoke very well.
<em>She is so pretty beautiful girl and all of boys there was trying to speak to her.</em>
She is so beautiful all of the boys were trying to talk to her.
<em>It was the first time that I listened more them speak.</em>
It was the first time that I listened more than I spoke.
<em>I mist know if they speak fast, slow or use a advanced English.</em>
I must know if they speak fast or slow, or if their English is at an advanced level.
<em>I hope enjoing these meetings and improve my speaking skill.</em>
I enjoy these meetings and hope to improve my skill in speaking.
-- Good luck with the pretty girl! ;)
What is happening?
Today I went to an English conversational meeting. There were some people I knew, but I haven't been there for a long time. They all seemed strange to me.
I met a weird guy who lived a year in Ireland. He spoke so slow that I thought he realised that I was a beginner.
There was a girl who I always saw in some pictures on a Facebook group. I thought she was starting to learn English. When I heard her speak, she spoke very well. She is a beautiful girl and all of boys were trying to talk to her.
It was the first time that I heard them speak. I think it was a good experience. I must know how people speak. I must know if they speak fast, slow or if they use advanced English.
I am enjoyng these meetings and improving my speaking skills.