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My favorite possessions My favorite possession is my computer, because it is a gift from my father to complete my study at the University, who bought it to me form Electronic shops, I have had it since 2011. The laptop has red color in outside, which marked with writing silver color in the middle on the top cover, it called TOSHIBA. It has a small keyboard, which has illuminated keyboard. It is very small size 13 inch, which has made in KOREA and has operating system as windows 7. I use it at my jobs, which is a design of oil fields and programs. i often use it everyday a 6 hours and i keep it on table in my office at home.
14 mei 2016 17:06
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My favorite possessions

My favorite possession is my computer, because it was a gift from my father to complete my studies at the University. He who bought it to me form an electronic shops, I have had it since 2011.
The laptop is has red color in on the outside, which marked with writing silver color  letters in the middle of the top cover, it called spelling TOSHIBA. It has a small keyboard, which has  is illuminated keyboard. It is very small in size; 13 inches. which has It was made in KOREA and has a Windows 7  operating system as windows 7.
I use it at work my jobs, where I design which is a design of oil fields and programs. i often use it for everyday a 6 hours a day and I keep it on the/a table in my office at home.

14 mei 2016
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My favorite possessions

My favorite possession is my computer, because it is a gift from my father to complete my study studies at the University., who He bought it to for me form from an Electronic shops,. I have had it since 2011.
The laptop has red color in is red on the outside, which and it is marked with writing in silver color in the middle on of the top cover, it called which says TOSHIBA. It has a small illuminated keyboard, which has illuminated keyboard. It is very small size, 13 inches., which has It was made in KOREA and its has operating system as is windows 7.
I use it at my jobs, which is a design of designing oil fields and programs. i often use it everyday a for 6 hours and i keep it on the table in my office at home.


Great job!

14 mei 2016
Thanks a lot for everyone help to correct my notic, but I was trying to use some relative clauses in it Kind Regards
14 mei 2016
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