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The curve graph makes a comprison among chicken, beef, lamb and fish in terms of consumption per person per week in an Europe country from 1979 to 2004.
As indicated in the graph, the consumption of beef, lamb and fish all exhibited a downward trend during 1979 to 2004. The figure of beef fluctuated dramatically most during the descent. It once occupied the biggest consumption accountting for 220g and then increased to almost 240g before eventually declined to about 100g。 However the change of lamb was gentler than beef, it declined from 150g to 60g. But the statistics of fish changed a little, just decreased about 10g.
By the contrast, the consumtion of chicken exhibited a remarkable tendency of rise from 140g to 250g,the only one increased.
From the figures demonstrated above , it is safe to draw a conclusion that people in Europe country would rather choose beef and lamb than chicken before 1989. But after that chicken got more favor from people out of some reasons.
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Please give me some corrections for my writting~~~~Thanks!!!!
The curve graph makes a comprison comparison among between chicken, beef, lamb and fish in terms of consumption per person per week in an Europe country European countries from 1979 to 2004.As indicated in the graph, the consumption of beef, lamb and fish all exhibited a downward trend during 1979 to 2004. The figures of for beef fluctuated dramatically most most dramatically during the descent. It once occupied the biggest consumption accountting accounting for 220g and then increased to almost 240g before eventually declined declining to about 100g。 However the change drop of in lamb was gentler less than beef, it declined from 150g to 60g. But the statistics of for fish only changed a little, just decreased decreasing by about 10g.
By the contrast, the consumtion consumption of chicken exhibited a remarkable tendency of rise increase from 140g to 250g, the only one increased being the only meat to show an increase.
From the figures demonstrated above , it is safe to draw a conclusion that prior to 1989 people in Europe country European countries would rather choose preferred beef and lamb than to chicken before 1989. But after that chicken got more favor from people out of some reasons became more popular with people for some
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