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About recent Earthquakes in Japan. We had heavy damage by tsunami in March 11th. Aftershock continued since then. Midnight of 7th, we had heavy earthquake again. The quake was magnitude of 7.1. Incidentally, quake of March 11th was magnitude of 9.0. Even though I was accessing the Internet then, my PC and TV fell down. I woke my family hurriedly, and we got out barefoot. Immediately following, we lost electricity because of big quake, namely the whole town became pitch dark... It was very horrible sight. The big quake continued after pitch dark... Now, life of all Japanese people is at the mercy of the earthquake, especially the people are worst that have three problems of earthquake, radioactivity and tsunami. I desire to revive of Japan and the all people.

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About recent Earthquakes in Japan.

We had heavy damage was induced by tsunami in March 11th.
Aftershocks continued since then. Midnight of 7th, we had a heavy(heavy is ok) earthquake again. The quake was with a magnitude of 7.1. Incidentally, the quake of March 11th was magnitude of 9.0.

Even though I was accessing the Internet then at that time, and my PC and TV fell down. I woke my family hurriedly, and we got out barefoot. Immediately afterwards following, we lost electricity because of that big quake, namely  the whole town became pitch dark... It was a very horrible (night or scene ?) sight. The big quake continued after in the pitch dark night...

Now, lifes of (of is correct) all Japanese people are is at the mercy of the earthquake, especially for those the people who are suffering from these three worst that have  problems, earthquake, radioactivity and tsunami.

I desire to revive the revival of Japan and the all the people.


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About recent Earthquakes in Japan.

We suffered heavy damage from the tsunami on March 11th.
Aftershocks have continued since then. Midnight of 7th, we had a strong earthquake again. The quake was magnitude of 7.1. Incidentally, the quake of March 11th was magnitude of 9.0.

Even though I was accessing the Internet at that moment, my PC and TV fell down. I woke my family hurriedly, and we got out barefoot. Immediately afterwards, we lost electricity because of the big quake, in fact the whole town became pitch dark... It was a very horrible sight. The big quake continued after pitch dark...

Now, life for all Japanese people is at the mercy of the earthquake, especially those people who have suffered the worst, with all three problems of earthquake, radioactivity and tsunami.

I desire the revival of Japan and all the people.


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No matter how bad the situation is, I believe Japanese will overcome all the disasters for it is a persistent and strong nation. By the way, thanks for modifying my composition.
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No matter how bad the situation is, I believe Japanese will overcome all the disasters for it is a persistent and strong nation. By the way, thanks for modifying my composition.

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