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Best Friend My best friend is Luis, he's 21 years old and study natural resources. We met in my english class this year. He's like a brother for me; is a fun person and always knows keep a secret. This curse was incredible, because I had his support, but the next year he won't take the class with me. I'm felling sad for this reason, because I want to see him every day because I love talk with him and probably I won't can see him, because we're very busies with the University.

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Best Friend

My best friend is Luis, he's 21 years old and studies natural resources. We met in my English class this year. He's like a brother for to me; he is a fun person and always knows when to(or how to) keep a secret. This course was incredible, because I had his support, but the next year he won't take the classes with me. I'm feeling sad for this reason, because I want to see him every day because I love talking with him and probably I won't can see him as often****, because we're will be very busy with the University     ??    .


***I used "as often" because I prefer to have that comparison to when you were feeling happier having his support. 

?? - not sure what about what influence the  University has on your time, so specify whether it's classes or some sort of research.   

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Best Friend

My best friend is Luis, he's 21 years old and studiesy natural resources. We met in my english class this year. He's like a brother for to me he is a fun person and always knows how to keep a secret. This curse was incredible, because I had his support, but the next year he won't be take the class with me in my class. I'm felling feeling sad for this reason, because I want to see him every day. because I to love talk with to him and i probably I won't can see him again because we're very busies busy with the University.


Good attempt, you need some help with sentences as well as your plurals. I would be happy to help you, feel free to message me

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Best Friend

My best friend is Luis (or I have a best friend, his name is Luis or My best friend's name is Luis), he's 21 years old and studies natural resources. We met in my english class this year. He's like a brother for to me, he is a fun person and always knows keep a secret knows how to keep a secret/keeps secrets safe. This course was incredible, because I had his support, but the next year he won't take  be taking this class with me. I'm felling  feel sad for this reason because of this  because  as I want to see him every day (or I wish I could see him every day or I won't be able to see him every day), because I love talking with to him and probably I won't can be able to see him, because since we're very busy with the University work/at the University. 


*Try avoiding repetition - words like "because" and try replacing them, mixing them if it's a long sentence with similar words like: "due to, since, as" etc., if they fit the context. Everything else is quite well-written. In blue I only made suggestions to how you could play around with the sentence :) Best of luck and hopefully you will see your friend as much as possible! 

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Best Friend

My best friend is Luis; he's 21 years old and studies natural resources. We met this year in my English class this year. He's like a brother for to me; he is a fun person and always knows how to keep a secret. This course was incredible, because I had his support, but the next year, he won't be taking the class with me. I'm feeling sad for this reason, because I want to see him every day. because I love talking with to him and but I probably I won't can be able to see him, because we're we will be** very busy with the university.*


*Having "because....because....because..." in a single, long sentence like this sounds awkward and very repetitive.

**This is a future stituation so you need the future tense (we're=>we are, you need we'll =>we will)

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