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Please help me in prooreading my essay. thank you Smarphones has become one of the most common necessities in the daily life. There are arguments the using these devices make people lest intelligent due to they are increasing their dependence on its technologies and not their brain. This essay will give the reason as to why this I totally agree with this idea. People are losing their mathematical abilities because of usage of cellphones technology. Nowadays, people tend to use this device a lot to make most of digital activities; it is not an exception for arithmetic operations. A report showed than in Mexico the majority of the high school students rely so much on their smartphones even to make some simple calculations. The youth argue they are no longer able to solve simple operation using their logic reasoning because there are already get use to using the gadget with technology. With this evidence is clear people are losing part of their skills because of the technology. Moreover, organization issues are evident as well because of technology. People make lots of mistakes when they do not count with a cellphone. For example, office workers most of times have the agenda done in this small device, such as meetings, visits, trips, etcetera due to the busy schedule they have, memorize all the events are not possible. There is a survey that was carried out in England, asking 100 administrative employees about how would have been a day in the office without a smallphone to do plan of activities, and the almost 100% of them commented that their memory would have collapsed. This is another argument showing the technology has an unfavorable effect on people. In conclusion, human intelligence is decreasing as the consequence of the technology development. This essay argued the negative impacts of the smartphones usage on one´s life are actually real.
16 mei 2019 02:25
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16 mei 2019
Smarphones has become one of the most common necessities in the daily life. There are arguments the using these devices make people lest intelligent due to they are increasing their dependence on its technologies and not their brain. This essay will give the reason as to why this I totally agree with this idea. People are losing their mathematical abilities because of usage of cellphones technology. Nowadays, people tend to use this device a lot to make most of digital activities; it is not an exception for arithmetic operations. A report showed than in Mexico the majority of the high school students rely so much on their smartphones even to make some simple calculations. The youth argue they are no longer able to solve simple operation using their logic reasoning because there are already get use to using the gadget with technology. With this evidence is clear people are losing part of their skills because of the technology. Moreover, organization issues are evident as well because of technology. People make lots of mistakes when they do not count with a cellphone. For example, office workers most of times have the agenda done in this small device, such as meetings, visits, trips, etcetera due to the busy schedule they have, memorize all the events are not possible. There is a survey that was carried out in England, asking 100 administrative employees about how would have been a day in the office without a smallphone to do plan of activities, and the almost 100% of them commented that their memory would have collapsed. This is another argument showing the technology has an unfavorable effect on people. In conclusion, human intelligence is decreasing as the consequence of the technology development. This essay argued the negative impacts of the smartphones usage on one´s life are actually real.
16 mei 2019

Please help me in prooreading my essay. thank you

Smarphones have become one of the most common necessities in the daily life. There are arguments that the using of these devices makes people less intelligent due to they are  their increasing their dependence on its technologies and not their brain. This essay will give the reason as to why this I totally agree with this idea.

People are losing their mathematical abilities because of usage of cellphones technology. Nowadays, people tend to use this device a lot to make the most of digital activities; it is not an exception for arithmetic operations. A report showed that in Mexico, the majority of the highschool students rely so much on their smartphones even to make some simple calculations. The youth argue they are no longer able to solve simple operation using their logical reasoning because they are already get used to using the gadget with technology. With this evidence , it is clear people are losing part of their skills because of the technology.

Moreover, organization issues are evident as well because of technology. People make lots of mistakes when they do not count with a cellphone. For example, office workers most of times have the agenda done in this small device, such as meetings, visits, trips, etcetera . Due to the busy schedule they have, memorizing all the events is not possible. There is a survey that was carried out in England, asking 100 administrative employees about how would have been a day in the office would have been without a smallphone to do the  planning of activities, and the almost 100% of them commented that their memory would have collapsed. This is another argument showing that technology has an unfavorable effect on people.

In conclusion, human intelligence is decreasing as a consequence of the technology development. This essay argued the negative impacts of the smartphones usage on one´s life are actually real.
16 mei 2019
Smartphones have become one of the most common necessities in daily life. There are arguments that having a high dependency on smartphones, will make people less intelligent.

In this essay, I will state some of the negative impacts that constant smartphone use has and the reason why I agree. People are losing their mathematical abilities due to the usage of cellphones. Nowadays, people can use their smartphone devices for pretty much anything and arithmetic is no exception. A report showed that in Mexico, most high school students rely heavily on their smartphones even to make simple calculations and because of this it is becoming more common that they no longer can solve simple operations mentally. With this evidence it is clear some people are losing their problem solving skills because of their dependency on technology.

The lack of organization and memory skills are other symptoms of having a technology dependency. For example, most office workers use smartphones to input daily activities such as meetings, visits, trips, etc., and due to their busy schedules, it is becoming increasingly harder to keep up with all these events. There was a survey carried out in England, asking 100 administrative employees how not having a smartphone would affect activity planning and almost 100% of the commented that their memory alone would have not been enough to keep up with the schedules.

In conclusion, as the advancements in technology are getting better, the higher the dependency humans will have thus leading to the decrease in human intelligence. This essay points out some negative and real issues that constant smartphone usage has on society.

16 mei 2019
Please help me in prooreading my essay. thank you

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Moreover, organisational issues are evident as well because of technology. People make a lot of mistakes when they do not count with their cellphone. For example, office workers most of times have the agenda on their device, such as meetings, visits, trips, e.t.c. due to their busy schedule, and remembering all the events is not possible. There is a survey that was carried out in England, asking 100 administrative employees about how would have been a day in the office without a cellphone to<s> do</s> plan our activities, and <s>the </s>almost all of them commented that their memory would have collapsed. This is another argument showing that technology has an unfavorable effect on people.

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16 mei 2019
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