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"There is no such thing as bad people. We’re all just people who sometimes do bad things." Colleen Hoover, It ends with us. When I read this line really made me think about that all the emotions exist in us, the experiences that we have and our personality are what made us. We could have bad feelings and negative thoughts or have good intentions and positive thoughts, but what really define us is the decision that we take. We all have taken good and bad decisions, maybe more of one side, but nobody is completely full with either good or bad decisions.
23 sep. 2023 18:18
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"There is no such thing as bad people. We’re all just people who sometimes do bad things." Colleen Hoover, It ends with us. When I read this line, it really made me think about how all the emotions that exist in us, the experiences that we have, and our personalities are what makes us. We could have bad feelings and negative thoughts or have good intentions and positive thoughts, but what really defines us is the decisions that we make. We all have made good and bad decisions, maybe more of one or the other, but nobody always makes only good or only bad decisions.
"Think about" is generally used before a noun or gerund, such as "I think about the future" or "I'm thinking about going running tomorrow." There are some exceptions, though, like "I'm thinking about how I made a mistake on my test." However, "think about that all the emotions" is incorrect. In your example, you would use either "about" OR "that" after "think." One example where you can use "about that" is "I thought about that," in which "that" is referring to a noun. I made "personality" plural because you used the word "our" before it, and since everyone can't have the same personality, "personality" should be plural. English speakers usually use the verb "make," not "take," when it comes to decisions, as in "I make good decisions." I changed "one side" to "one or the other" because it sounds more natural. I understand what you meant, but good and bad decisions aren't really "sides." For the last part, I changed it because "completely full" would not be used in this context. I believe you were trying to say that nobody makes either all good decisions or all bad decisions. This was great overall!
23 september 2023
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