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Daiki
Hi, how’s going today?
Long time no see everyone. My university begin class since last week. Today, I’ll tell you guys some of my summer vacation activities. At first, I went to BBQ with my friends in July. It was so fun. After that, I played badminton and fireworks. I played it for the first time since high school, so I was really excited. I think fireworks is unique culture to Japan, so I strongly felt Japanese atmosphere then. In addition, I went to zoo with my friends. I watched many animals. I went to a room of reptile, bad smell of this room made me sick...lol. In my opinion, the smell of a zoo is so bad, but it is good point of zoo. I have many good memories more. I’ll tell you all that next time. Good bye, thanks.
28 sep. 2021 04:13
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Hi, how’s going today? Long time no see everyone. My university classes started
last week. Today, I’ll tell you guys about some activities of my summer vacation. At first, I went to BBQ with my friends in July. It was so fun!
After that, I played badminton and let off fireworks. I had done this for the first time
since high school, so I was really excited. I think fireworks are a unique culture
so typical to Japan, so I strongly felt the Japanese atmosphere then. In addition, I went to the zoo with my friends. I watched many animals. I went to the room of reptile tanks. The bad smell of this room made me sick...lol. In my opinion, the smell of the zoo is so bad, but it is part of the zoo. I have many more good memories. I’ll tell you
all that next time. Good bye, thanks.
28 september 2021
Hi, how’s it going today? Long time no see. My university began classes last week. Today, I want to tell you about some of my summer vacation
activities. First, I went to a BBQ with my friends in July and saw some fireworks. It was so much fun! Afterwards, I played badminton; I played it for the first time since high school, so I was really excited. I think fireworks are unique to the culture of Japan, so I strongly felt the Japanese atmosphere around me. In addition, I went to a zoo with my friends. I saw many animals. I visited a reptile exhibit, and this room smelled bad and made me sick. In my opinion, the smell of a zoo is so bad. I have many good memories from my summer vacation. I will tell you more about it next time. Goodbye, and thanks.
You have combined your experiences with badminton and fireworks. It was hard to edit this because you go back and forth between these two subjects. Try to write about then separately instead of in one sentence.
28 september 2021
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Engels, Japans, Koreaans
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